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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 16, 2006 16:19:40 GMT -5
I am trying! don't die on me Aunt Tahiri!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 16, 2006 21:33:21 GMT -5
I won't! (yet). ;D
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 18, 2006 19:24:13 GMT -5
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 18, 2006 20:10:52 GMT -5
Okay, it's my turn to beg for an update!
*begs*
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 19, 2006 21:10:16 GMT -5
*begs along with Leia*
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 19, 2006 22:51:11 GMT -5
i wrote the poem in study hall
What They Never Knew
It was concealed, Not a witness to the real events. She was not fondly welcomed to life A secret long hid Because she was what they never knew
~~Chapter One~~
Zekk lifted his daughter, hoping to hush the cries. Anni was angry and upset. All he had to do was make her use that anger against him. She was the last hope of the Sith. If he couldn't train her, maybe he would find another. She was young, which meant that if he started now, she could be the most powerful ever.
Use your anger, strike me down.
The Darkest Knight focused on Anni's mind. He was getting images and voices. He saw himself with his fingers outstretched. Then he saw blackness. Anguish consumed him, as Anni cried from the top of her lungs. Jaina. The baby was feeling Jaina's pain via the Force. Jay might have mentioned that their daughter was strong, but at such an early age it was impossible to have that great a bond.
Anni was so far refusing to, but he kept encouraging her. She could be a very powerful Sith. Maybe even she would lead the new generation of Dark Ones and wipe out the Lightsiders. Sith would oneday rule. If she was not willing to embrace that, she would be forced to.
***
Light.
Blur.
Green.
Darkness.
Floating.
Stillness.
Voices.
Muffled voices.
She peered with one of her eyes. Her bones still ached, and her skin tingled with newness under the clothe. She saw the people on the other side of the glass, through the green liquid. They were dressed in white, with clipboards in there hands. She then realized that she was upside down. Her joints hurt bad. Too bad for her to think about it.
Then she realized her eyesight had returned. Her eyes felt much better at that.
At that moment, one of the doctors came up to her. She turned and signaled to one of her collegues.
As soon as she was out of the tank, one of the doctors said, "Nice to see you awake, Jaina Solo."
Jaina froze. They knew who she was? That was bad. If they knew who she was, they must have changed her name on Anni's birth certificate.
"What makes you think I am Jaina Solo?" she tested, trying her weight on her legs. They held, and she let go of the railing.
"First," the female doctor said gently, " we tested you blood. Second, you look just like her. And third, when you signed the certificate for your daughter's birth, you signatured as Jaina Solo."
Jaina in turn just stared in amazment. "Does the Holonet know?"
"No one does. Not even your parents," the other replied.
"Good." Jaina looked around for a moment. "Can I get out of here anytime soon? I am concerned about my daughter."
"Your husband isn't good with kids either?" the doctor {Jaina peered on her white coat} Doctor Naberrie asked casually.
"Something like that," Jaina said in turn.
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 20, 2006 1:14:32 GMT -5
Doctor Naberrie? Hmmm...
Great update, Anni!
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 20, 2006 16:30:00 GMT -5
Thanks JediLeia
nothing really about doctor naberrie. the name was the only i could think of
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 21, 2006 1:31:02 GMT -5
Ah, I see.
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 21, 2006 1:37:17 GMT -5
and now the second chapter is in the making!
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 21, 2006 1:46:22 GMT -5
*dances* H'ray! *cheers*
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 21, 2006 15:34:26 GMT -5
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Post by DV's Daughter_♥ on Jan 21, 2006 19:16:07 GMT -5
great work anni can't wait for next chapter
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 22, 2006 10:24:47 GMT -5
Can't wait!!!
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 22, 2006 11:48:15 GMT -5
same here.
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 22, 2006 18:03:23 GMT -5
thank you everyone ;D
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 29, 2006 9:35:42 GMT -5
*is still waiting* ;D
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 29, 2006 10:44:44 GMT -5
sorry, something had post-poned the writing but it can be up at 3 or so
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 29, 2006 12:46:08 GMT -5
*cheers*
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 29, 2006 19:26:09 GMT -5
i suddenly had lost my ability to write Tenel [glow=red,2,300]~~~Chapter 2~~~[/glow] Jacen Solo stared out over the stars. His twin was out there; he knew it. He had not felt her die. She was alive. Or was he only hoping so? Jaina had disappeared nearly a year ago, and nothing about her was in the Holonews. Maybe the speratic mention of her name, which was always associated with the list of missing. None of the Galaxy really seemed to care. They turned their heads or went about doing something else, because they didn't care. Tenel Ka had offered the Consortium help in the search. The Solos had accepted. They all knew that Tenel was a friend of Jaina's. They only hoped that they would be able to find her before time ran out. \/\/ The warrior princess of Dathomir watched the middle Solo child stand and look blankly out of the window on the bridge. He was a mess, literally. His hair was long, shaggy, and dirty. His clothes were were wrinkled but not stained, and he was 10 kilos underweight. Tenel touched Jacen's shoulder lightly, and he didn't turn around. Through her fingertips, she felt the raging storm within him. Drawing her hand back, she turned to leave. "Don't go," came his voice as she gripped the handle. Her hair slung over her shoulder as she faced him. Jacen was watching her now, admiration in his eyes. This made her very nervous. "I just thought you didn't want any company," she replied quietly, hoping to keep the silence. "Naw. C'mere," he said. Tenel slowly stepped up to him by the window, and he draped an arm over her shoulder. "I'd like you to be near me right about now. What do you think?" "This is a fact," Tenel said, snuggling into his chest as he let her.
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Post by yodaman on Jan 30, 2006 17:44:45 GMT -5
wow
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 30, 2006 19:40:57 GMT -5
thanks. Where is everyone else?
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 30, 2006 21:13:27 GMT -5
On stinkin' vacation. I loved this chappie! I think you nailed TK. That's just me tho. ;D
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 30, 2006 23:10:58 GMT -5
Yes, I think you did VERY well writing Tenel Ka. Yes, very well indeed.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 31, 2006 10:04:21 GMT -5
I need to update!
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 31, 2006 14:07:36 GMT -5
aawww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so good!!!!! <3 it!
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 31, 2006 20:03:04 GMT -5
thanks everyone. Working on the next AND writing another story...
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 31, 2006 20:58:00 GMT -5
Another one! WHOO HOO!!!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Feb 1, 2006 20:36:56 GMT -5
*dances*
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Feb 19, 2006 11:32:22 GMT -5
look at what i have Chapter 3 Jaina hid in the alley of the busy street on Ennth. She was presumed dead to the public, and she intended for it to stay that way. The people here were tall. The average height at least had to be 1.9 meters. This made her stick out in crowds, being the shortest. Yet her height had it's advantages; she could sneak around. The Central Library was just across the street from here hiding place. She could make it there and it'd be a safer place to hide. Jaina looked both ways before darting over as quickly as she could. She quietly opened the doors, poking her head in. No one was in sight. Sliding in, Jaina found that the atmosphere was calm. The noise of the streets didn't penetrate the glass doors. Soft music flowed around. Someone walked by, and she pressed herself up against the end of the bookshelf. Hopefully her decision wasn't wrong. At the front there was a box that read lost and found. Surely the librarian would recognize her. She looked in the rows of books for a pair of glasses. None. Jaina began to feel anxious for finding a way to get off planet. She prayed her scheme worked. A woman carrying a stack of holodisks cantered by. S pair of shades fell from her pocket and Jaina thanked the force. She sped by, gracefully picking up the shades and putting them on. "May I help you, ma'am?" the young librarian asked when she came up to the counter. "Yes," Jaina added," as a matter of fact you can. I think I left my purse here a couple days ago. Can I check the lost and found box?" "Sure," came the energetic reply. "I'll be right back. When you are done, just put the box on the counter." "Okay," Jaina said, taking the box from the lady's hands. She librarian sped off toward the back area. Jaina dug through all sorts of handbags. A black one, the last in the box, held several credit cards and a handful of credits. She decided upon that one before placing the box back onto the counter. Now all she needed to find was a place where she could buy some clothes. ~*~*~*~ The Junior turned out to be the only place that had her size. Extra small in petite was her size on Ennth. She understood where Zekk got his height. After buying several pairs of jeans and button up shirts, she headed for lodging. Once she had a room, she had a long shower. While combing her wet hair, she watched he news. The first shipload of people were leaving tomorrow at 0800 hours. The destruction of Ennth was in a month. Tickets for the journey to Ennis, Ennth's sister planet that rarely had disasters, could be bought at the door for 500 credits. Jaina had a ride off that rock.
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