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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 7, 2006 15:59:17 GMT -5
*cough* We do have a daughter... FOOCL!!!!
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 7, 2006 16:03:01 GMT -5
;D
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 7, 2006 16:06:37 GMT -5
*still laughing*
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Post by tahiriveilasolo on Jan 9, 2006 21:12:00 GMT -5
Oi.
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 9, 2006 21:27:03 GMT -5
i am so bored i am re-arranging my hair stuff and headbands. [face_plain] And i almost have the next chapter....
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 10, 2006 18:08:56 GMT -5
yay!
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 10, 2006 21:04:06 GMT -5
and what do i see?...... \/\/\/\/\\/\/ Part Seven of the Prologue "What?" Jaina asked coming up behind him. "Let's go to Ennth." He said without turning around. "I don't think so, or at least not yet," she said with Anni still in her arms. Her iced eyes were beginning to sting. Zekk knew she would have to get to a medic to have that checked out. She could either be permenantly blind or temporarily. That didn't matter as much since she couldn't see at the moment. "And will you tell me why?" Zekk asked. "Can we think about the moment right now?! You know, about what's happening?!" She shouted. Anni began to wimper from the outbreak, and Jaina rocked her slowly, sending love through the Force. "Jaina, I'm sorry-" "Oh, no, you aren't. This is waaaayyyy past sorry. And you know that," she said with mild disgust in her voice. "I-," he tried to start but was imidiately cut off as a new presence entered the conversation. He closed his eyes and listened to the tiny voice. He opened his eyes again and saw Jaina and Anni. Father and daughters' eyes met, and he walked closer to them. Jaina didn't move, but she did hope he wouldn't do anything. She saw that Anni and Zekk were staring at each other and she instantly knew what was going on. When the doctors had let Jaina hold the baby for the first time, she had felt the same way. It was like a void had been filled, even though it felt like there was never a void. Zekk stepped up close to carefully take the baby, who giggled softly. Jaina stopped feeding her as Zekk took her. Jaina's face broke into a grin when she heard that small giggle, and tears streamed down her cheeks. The Darkest Knight wiped them away, and she was suprised that she let him touch her at all. Sensing her trust, he pulled her all the way into his arms. "I need help, Jay." He said absent-mindedly. "I need help to come back. I need to redeem myself if your father will let me live.-" {that drew a muffled laugh from Jaina.} "- I need help with my new family." "Maybe we can find that on Ennth," Jay suggested after a moment. Everyone probably thinks we are dead. The Shadow Academy blew up, you know. No going back. I can help you." "I'd like that," he replied, lifting her chin up. He leaned down as she leaned up and their lips met. /\/\/\/ I turned Zekk too easily
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 11, 2006 11:28:35 GMT -5
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 11, 2006 20:05:50 GMT -5
AWWWWW!!! I think it was okay... you could've made Zekk a little more hesitant, but knowing he couldn't turn back, but I love it the way it is! I think you've done an exellent job with this fic! ;D
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 11, 2006 20:25:59 GMT -5
tanks aunt tahiri! i ahve alittle more instore for Zekk. Getting there... and thanks everyone!!!!
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 12, 2006 8:19:01 GMT -5
welcome!
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 12, 2006 8:22:55 GMT -5
You did an awesome job turning Zekk, Anni. I'm trying to turn Jaina in one of my fics now, and I can't get it right. She either seems too hesitant, or way too forgiving. I gotta go work on that.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 12, 2006 15:36:20 GMT -5
Either that or she seriously loves Zekk.
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 12, 2006 15:37:34 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 12, 2006 16:32:51 GMT -5
i am working on the next chapter! more soon! ;D
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 12, 2006 17:26:44 GMT -5
Well, she does seriously love Zekk, but even if she did, she still turns to easily. It's correct now.
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 12, 2006 21:50:00 GMT -5
guess what i have... /\/\/\/\ Part Eight of the Prologue Zekk and Jaina went for a walk in the field of Ennth, having left Anni on the star yacht asleep. They were about half an hour outside of the village that Jaina had stayed in. "I'm glad you have decided to come back," she said as they came to a slower pace. Zekk nodded in return, not feeling all so sure about the decision. Did he really want to be apart of the weaker Jedi that served the so-call-it "Lightside" of the Force? He loved the power he had with Darkness, how it was so much easier to use. All he had to do was call on anger. "I don't think so," Jaina said, scanning his thoughts. It snapped him out of the train in his mind. She didn't think so? Who was she to tell him what he did and did not need? "You will not tell me what to do. Do I merely seem to you as a lost child?" he snarled at her. "I didn't-," she managed to say before Zekk outstretched his hand. Her vocal chords shut, and she grabbed her throat. "Yes, you did," he said and moved a finger. Her right arm broke in several places, and he shattered the elbow. She tried to scream, but choked. "You can never make me turn," he continued, breaking her other arm and legs. He thought about her spine, but that would kill her. Zekk only wanted her to suffer. He used the Force grip on her and yanked her a meter off the ground, then slung her down. Turning to leave, he spit on her. "I don't need the Jedi." He went back to the yacht. Zekk started up the ship, and went to the skies. And shooting the ship to the closest planet, he went back to the other room. Anni still lay asleep on the bed, and he picked her up. Sending her a sleep suggestion might make her rest until they reached Ennis. Hopefully it would, becasue he didn't want to end up hurting his daughter. She was possibly the last hope for the Sith.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 12, 2006 22:13:35 GMT -5
ACK!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zekk, you-you-you-... *walks away before she can say something not allowed*
*comes back* I need more. [/robot_voice]
;D
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 12, 2006 22:45:49 GMT -5
more you will get soon. give 3 sets of four-words that best you. how everyone feels in the story; Zekk= Jaina= Anni=
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 13, 2006 12:39:32 GMT -5
lol i agree w/tha faces. I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!! zekk------ARG!!!!!!!!!!! *mad face* so mean.......
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 13, 2006 18:55:48 GMT -5
thanks. i'm glad you liked it. Zekk is mean for at least the next part. Poor Jaina. Zekk needs to remember that Jaina & Anni have a great Force bond; he's in trouble One set of words that decribes me best; 1) not at all popular
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 14, 2006 21:43:57 GMT -5
Not true at all, best friend Anni. ::hugs::
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 14, 2006 21:53:26 GMT -5
Thanks Aunt Tahiri but I'm speaking about my 'real life'
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 15, 2006 1:53:20 GMT -5
Wow! Zekk is REALLY harsh! I didn't think that he would leave her defenselsess on a planet alone. Jaina, I know you love him, but don't you think enough might be enough? Yeah, I know. I still want Jaina, Zekk, and Anni to all walk off happily into the sunset.
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 15, 2006 19:23:33 GMT -5
maybe later they can walk into the sunset. chapter 1 coming soon......
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 15, 2006 19:34:56 GMT -5
Wait...you mean that was just the prologue? AWESOME!!!
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 15, 2006 19:38:36 GMT -5
yes, that's just the prologue
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 16, 2006 10:54:40 GMT -5
that's so kool.....
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 16, 2006 11:12:04 GMT -5
thanks ;D
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 16, 2006 15:26:15 GMT -5
Post something now or I will blow. [/end_threat]
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