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Post by Courtney Solo on Oct 21, 2005 15:44:47 GMT -5
Title: Betrayed Author(s): StarWarsFreak Disclaimer: I own everything I write, just not the characters. Summary: Jaina runs away from Jagged Fel, partly because he asked her to marry him, and she wasn't ready. She left her best friend, Zekk Ennth, feeling betrayed, because Jaina had run away from his best friend. It seeems that Jagged Fel has moved on, when he starts flirting with Danni Quee, making Kyp Durron very upset. Jagged Fel looses friends, and Zekk pursues Jaina with a loving, patient heart. Notes: All spelling errors are my own.
Betrayed
I never thought that I would be calling Jaina Solo a traitor, but it seems I am, and that almost breaks my heart.
I am in Love with Jaina, but she does not know it. All the time she has she spends with Jagged Fel, who was one of my best friends, but now, we're fighting over the same girl.
She doesn't even know.
Jaina disappeared, no one knows why. But I do.
It's Jagged Fel, he's proposed. But knowing Jaina, she just wants to be free, and Jag rushed her.
Early on in life, when we were close, we promised each other that we would always look after each other, that we would never go too far that the other person could not see us.
But now she's gone, and she's left me here, breaking her promise, because I have no idea where she is.
She's left me, Betrayed.
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Good? Bad? Anyone want more?
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Post by bottledupinside on Oct 28, 2005 21:55:18 GMT -5
haha love it on this site and the other site!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Oct 29, 2005 15:27:16 GMT -5
Thanks for replying bottled! And thanx 4 joining! ;D
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Post by u mean siri711 on Nov 4, 2005 14:30:42 GMT -5
sweet!!!!!! post more, please. how do u get da ::)smiley thingys??nevermind....i just found out..
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Post by katie on Nov 4, 2005 14:32:37 GMT -5
sorry. i luv da smilely thingys!!!
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Post by dariusflint on Nov 4, 2005 18:55:26 GMT -5
Are there any RPG's
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 4, 2005 20:25:02 GMT -5
Hey dariusflint! I'm still kinda new to the abbreviations, what are RPG's?
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 4, 2005 21:57:08 GMT -5
Day 2 of my imprisonment:
I bet alot of people think I ran away, and that's probably partly true,
Jag Fel, the man I thought I loved, proposed to me two days ago, and I told him I wasn't ready. He rushed me. I'm not so sure about my personal feelings anymore.
The one thing I know for certain though, I'm breaking a promise.
Early on in life, Zekk and I promised eachother that we'd always watch over one another, and even though we weren't as close before, we've always kept our promise.
I try to reach out to anyone, anyone who will let me in, but they can't feel me, or hear me. Only Jacen, and he is doing his best.
Zekk and Jag probably, actually, most definately feel betrayed, but I was running away from Jag's proposal, not Jag himself.
I hope whenever I'm found, I intend to be found, that the truth will reveal itself, if I'm dead or alive.
Zekk, I'm sorry, please understand.
Jag, I'm not sorry, I can't marry you, not yet.
Mom, I'm sorry for giving you an 'almost heart attack'.
Dad, I'm still independent, don't worry, your girl will find her way home.
Jacen, your the only one who acn hear me, try to make everyone else understand.
Anakin, Take care of Tahiri, for she and I have become close these days.
Tahiri, Watch over your mischevious boyfriend, he's a sly one.
Kyp, I'm still not willing to be your padawan. (Joking...)
They have taken my lightsaber, I can't sense them in the force, which means they are probably either Yuuzhan Vong, or working for the Vong.
I'll try to write down as much as I can the next few days, because they may indeed be my last...
Jaina Solo
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 5, 2005 16:26:45 GMT -5
Lol. I didn't realize this was Betrayed! So I just read that post, but the whole time, I was thinking, "Haven't I read this before?" LOL! ;D
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 6, 2005 21:24:34 GMT -5
Destiny.... *shakes head* What am I gonna do w/ u?
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 8, 2005 18:38:04 GMT -5
Anything but throw me to the voxyn. Or take a lightsaber to me. Or throw me to the ysalamiri. Okay, maybe not anything.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 8, 2005 20:21:03 GMT -5
Not much, anyways. --------------------------------------------------------- Jacen is trying to convince everyone that Jaina has been captured instaed of running away. Running away seems more like Jaina, but she could have been captured, and it seems, well, WEIRD of me to wish so, but I hope she HAS, so that would mean that she didn't betray me intentionally. Jacen wants to gather a search team to go search for her, Jagged Fel, however, decided to bark up Kyp Durron's tree, and is flirting with Danni Quee, he's such a traitor. (I don't mind calling HIM that...) Kyp is steaming mad with Jag, so I think he'll join the team, I'm on it, (of course) along with Jacen, Danni, Tahiri, Anakin, and Han Solo. Leia Organa Solo would come, but she can't evade the case she's on, and I don't blame her, it could end the war for good! (In our favor.) We set out tomorrow, and I am now completely convinced that Jaina is in trouble, and didn't run away, at least not from ME. (I hope.) Hang On, Jaina. Zekk Ennth ----------------------------------- SHORT, but still a post!
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 8, 2005 23:13:08 GMT -5
Jag, you scum-sucking dog! Jaina disappears, and two days later, you're flirting with Danni Quee(who, by the way, is in Kyp's territory)? Jagged Fel, you sicken me. That's right Jaina, you thought you loved him. He sucks. Don't go back to him! Okay, I'm done talking to the characters. Great post, Court.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 9, 2005 14:14:53 GMT -5
*laughs* heh heh. That was hilarious of you, D. Thanks!
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 9, 2005 18:36:02 GMT -5
Hey, no problem! I yell at the characters in my head, anyways. Why shouldn't I put it on paper?
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 11, 2005 19:55:08 GMT -5
You mean on an MB?
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 12, 2005 1:00:18 GMT -5
Yeah. That. It's basically paper. Cyber paper. I've been in English too long.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 12, 2005 19:28:40 GMT -5
I is kidding with u. ;D
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 12, 2005 22:44:35 GMT -5
Oh. Cool.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 13, 2005 19:49:12 GMT -5
Actually, we don't! Wouold you like me to start a board specificly for RPG's?
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Post by siri711 on Nov 15, 2005 14:54:13 GMT -5
what r RPG's? ?
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 15, 2005 14:59:44 GMT -5
Role Playing Games ;D But we don't have any yet.
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Post by siri711 on Nov 15, 2005 17:17:18 GMT -5
o. kool.
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 15, 2005 23:40:45 GMT -5
RPG's are fun! But they can be stressful sometimes unless members are actively online and updating. And, they can get confusing once in awhile.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 16, 2005 20:32:22 GMT -5
s'pecially if both authors have completely diff. ideas...that sux.
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 17, 2005 1:04:47 GMT -5
Oh yeah. I used to RPG via neopets.com (don't ask). It was a li'l jumbled over there.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 18, 2005 19:58:52 GMT -5
I can't stand the waiting, it's like having a vibroblade being etched into your back one second is like a day.
Jacen tells me that he is on his way, along with Dad, Danni, Kyp, Tahiri, Anakin and Zekk. Good old Zekk. Sometimes I find myself wondering what he's thinking, I hope he doesn't think me a tratior.
Sometimes the guards come into my lonely cell and torture me for information, they still have masks, so I can't be positive of who they are working for, but fortunately, the talk to eachother in Vong, so I can only assume.
They think their torturing sessions hurt me, but their company assures me, and that emans I have a good chance of survival, I hope.
I can't really understand their language, but I can understand three words, Jedi, four and days. I have no idea what that means, but it can't be good,
Zekk, please hurry!
Jaina Solo
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 28, 2005 0:33:40 GMT -5
Yeah, good ol' Zekk. I need to read some more of the NJO books so that I can figure out if I like the Jaina/Zekk combo or the Jaina/Kyp combo or the Jaina/Jag combo. I might stick with Zekk...
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 28, 2005 14:33:17 GMT -5
I like J/Z (obviously) and sumtimes J/K, cuz Kyp is so much more mature than Jag. And hotter.... ;D
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 28, 2005 22:18:58 GMT -5
lol! Wait...how can you tell the hotness? They only exist in the books!
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