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Post by anakinsangelover on May 27, 2006 16:00:03 GMT -5
Ok this is my first attempt to write a fanfic. I first posted this on ff.net but one of my friends told my to post it here and i know this is short but im doing wat i did on ff.net and there's gonna be more later. Hehe anyway on with the story. **** I also posted this on the Jedi Council Forums.
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Prologue
The powerful Sith Lord stood staring out the blazing Coruscant sun. Awaiting the Jedi to come. 'Fools, they will not be able to stop me. The Sith shall finally rule the galaxy. And I shall have the Chosen One as my apprentice.'
Chuckling softly, he walked towards his chair, and sat down. He dismissed his guards so he can be alone. He wanted to be strong and prepared when the Jedi arrive.
Sidous summoned the Force to show him the future.
Soon he saw what, for the last thirteen years of planning, fulfilled. Anakin Skywalker becoming his apprentice, Amidala dying, the Jedi destroyed, the fall of the republic and the rise of his grand Empire.
'Soon, so very soon.'
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Post by anakinsangelover on May 27, 2006 16:00:47 GMT -5
OK Chapter one not very long but it's not my falut my friend anna wrote this part and sort of messed it up and she begged me to leave it like this so im srry
Chapter 1
Anakin Skywalker made his way through the Jedi temple, searching for Mace Windu. After a few minutes of searching he found him in the main hanger.
"Master Windu," Anakin called breathlessly.
"Yes Skywalker what is it?"
Anakin took a deep breath, and said," I found out a terrible secret. Chancellor Palpatine is the Sith Lord we have been looking for."
He took another deep breath, “He had tried to seduce me to the Dark Side, and become his apprentice."
Windu's eyes widened in shock, "A Sith Lord!" Anakin nodded.
"Then our worst fear has been realized. I will take a few Jedi to help me arrest him. I want you to stay here and wait for us in the Council Chamber."
Right after Mace said those words Anakin sparked an idea. 'Let's hope this works.'
"Master, if I may, I would like to go to Senator Amidala's apartment to check on the security. She may be in danger."
Mace looked at Anakin suspiciously, "Alright, but you must stay there until i contact you. When you do hurry back. We need to discuss something."
'That's strange.
"Yes Master. May the Force be with you and the others."
"And with you Skywalker."
Then he left to gather Jedi to arrest the so called Chancellor of the Republic.
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Post by Courtney Solo on May 27, 2006 19:36:05 GMT -5
Wow! That's an awesome start!!! *dances* Welcome to my site! *hugs* C  S |
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General Aleema
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The Nightsisters will rule the galaxy AGAIN!!
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Post by General Aleema on Jun 12, 2006 18:13:49 GMT -5
That is AWSOME!!!!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jun 12, 2006 20:46:06 GMT -5
More soon? [face_batting]
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Post by Jeditheskyisblue on Sept 12, 2006 14:25:41 GMT -5
Are you going to continue this story? I really like the beginning.
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Post by Dorian Ravencroft on Sept 12, 2006 19:21:21 GMT -5
who are you? you know you should really register.
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Post by Cassa Solo on Sept 13, 2006 23:07:20 GMT -5
Hey new member.I like your story.Pretty good begging. P.S. Name's Cassa.and her's a piece of advice.Love your enemies do not hate them.Make friends for they will surely come in handy if the need arises. Oh,yes and don't let Dorian Blank get to you.  |
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Post by Courtney Solo on Sept 16, 2006 17:50:56 GMT -5
*sigh* Advice already.
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Post by Cassa Solo on Sept 17, 2006 0:15:53 GMT -5
He'll probably need it.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Oct 5, 2006 11:28:42 GMT -5
LOL, here.  |
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Post by Cassa Solo on Oct 21, 2006 14:46:19 GMT -5
I hate it when these people visit..post..and never speak to us again..HOW DARE THEY!!!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Oct 24, 2006 15:50:20 GMT -5
LOL, they'll come back. |
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Post by UnrealConseqence on Nov 1, 2006 0:02:42 GMT -5
Hey, I just registered right when I saw the site ;D. Idk why these people don't do the same.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 4, 2006 23:01:16 GMT -5
Well, they're cautious...? |
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Post by Cassa Solo on Nov 5, 2006 0:30:04 GMT -5
lol, I believe you just insulted your own site. |
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The Nightsisters will rule the galaxy AGAIN!!
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Post by General Aleema on Nov 22, 2006 12:36:40 GMT -5
haha... why woukd they be cautious??
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 24, 2006 10:46:18 GMT -5
No idea.
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Post by Cassa Solo on Nov 24, 2006 13:18:36 GMT -5
Jon maybe...or the wierd unlikely system of posting... |
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 27, 2006 18:32:59 GMT -5
Yeah, yeah. Even though I DO own this site, and I made up the rules, the topics do sometimes get boring. SOMETIMES. |
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Post by Cassa Solo on Nov 28, 2006 22:23:58 GMT -5
That's pretty much unnavoidable...TF.N would get boring if it didn't have an entire group of lifeless members. |
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 30, 2006 18:19:53 GMT -5
LOL.
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Jedi Knight Evil Twin Of Courtney Solo 