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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 8, 2005 20:31:35 GMT -5
OK! ( )
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 18, 2005 20:08:34 GMT -5
NXT POST: Chak was just about to relax and fall asleep when his comlink buzzed. "... Fel? We're on our way...we sense trouble, keep your eyes open... both of 'em." "Will do, Mara." He whistled and his stormtroppers loooked at him. "Stand at attention!" He commanded. "I'm not Mara, I'm Lola Jinzler." He gasped. "The woman we were searchig for?!" "I wouldn't say 'woman' I'd say 'rascal', but you can use any term you want." Dean Jinzler's voice came online. "Sir! Wolvkils at 6:00!"" He wheeled around as 100 or so wolvkils raced towards them. "Open fire!" They all did so gladly. But only a few wolvkils fell. "Target one at a time! Pair up! Don't give them one second to advance!" Chak yelled, drawing his blaster. "Fel to Skywalkers: We need immediate back-up!" He shouted into his comm unit. "Your request is about to be fulfiled, Lola is trying to sneak away to help you, we have our own problems here." Dean Jinzler's voice crackled over the comm. Great, I'm going to be rescued by an old lady with a lightsaber. Chak mused to himself. A specific wolvkil was showing special resistance to the blaster bolts and was STILL charging. And from the looks of it, Chak was its target. -------------------------------------------------------------------- "Commander Fel has been bit! I can't loosen the wolvkils mouth from his arm!" A stormtroooper's paniced voice sounded over the comm unit. I hope my brother explains everything. One goes away for 50 years and comes back and there are CLONES. she thought to herself. "Lola to Stormtropper Unit 501st: Help is on the way. Try to kill the wolvkil, not lossen its grip!" Thank you, ma'am." Commander Fel said, gasping into his worn comlink. "Wow, that hurts!" "Hang tight. How many more wolvkils are there?" She asked, Fel paused while counting. "About 50." "Oh, it's not as bad as I thought." Lola rounded the corner slowly, the wolvkils were almost trampling the men in black armour. Calling upon the force and igniting her lightsaber, Lola ran as fast as she could to meet the wolvkils before they killed all of her allies. To human eyes, she would've appeared only a blur. Slicing away wolvkil after wolvkil, she dodged her way through all of them, leaving the wounded to be shot by the stormtroopers. When they were all dead she stopped and deactivated her lightsaber. A man, around 20, was lying on the ground, clutching at his right arm, which was covered in blood. She ran to his side and helped him to his feet. "Where's my blaster?" His eyes were still squeezed shut in pain. She spotted a dignified blaster a few feet away and called it to her hand. A few stormtroopers jumped. "Here." She put it in his holster. "Hand me your injured arm." He winced, but let her stretch it out. She placed her hand above his shoulder, where his arm wasn't injured. The blood began to disappear, and his arm once again looked human. He opened his eyes when he no longer felt pain. Instead of seeing an ancient, kindly face as he had expected, he saw a young woman, no older than 18, and she was beautiful. "H-How did you do that?" He asked finally. "I am a Jedi Knight, and I used to work in the sick-bay at the Jedi Academy." She looked at the ground. "-50 years ago." He gaped. "You're 68!?" "Sixty-eight. But in realistic terms I'm only 18. To a Jedi, time doesn't matter in a trance. Even 50 years." "I wish I was a Jedi." Chak mumled to himself. Lola laughed. "I'm an 18 year old girl who happens to have been born 68 years ago." She grinned. "We should leave, where there's wolvkil," She motioned to a dead creature. "-There's Vagaari." Chak nodded and motioned for his unit to follow her. "Add Miss Lola Jinzler to your recognize and obey, please gentlemen." Lola chuckled at the 'gentlemen'. "Mara, Luke and my brother are fighting off stray plasma shots, or were when I left them." She called over her shoulder. "So...call me ignorant, but why are Vagaari attacking us? Again? nd why did they attack you in the forst place?" Chak asked, trotting up beside Lola. "Thos are questions I haven't yet abswered for myself, my friend. My guess is that Outbound Flight was carrying something much more valuable than broadcasted. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Author's Note: I created Lola Jinzler with Mandie Moore in mind. Just a random thought (after seeing 'A Walk to Remember')
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 28, 2005 0:23:11 GMT -5
I love this update! And I will resist the impulse to reveal all possible foreshadowings and kill your whole story, Courtney.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 28, 2005 14:49:47 GMT -5
Thta would be nice. ;D
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Post by JediLeia on Nov 28, 2005 22:17:24 GMT -5
Si.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Nov 29, 2005 20:19:00 GMT -5
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Post by zekkofennth on Dec 14, 2005 14:31:25 GMT -5
I think JediLeia has killed it for you, Commander Courtney. ;D
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Post by Courtney Solo on Dec 14, 2005 19:41:47 GMT -5
Shhhhh! (She may have, but don't INSULT our favorite admin! {besides me} ;D )
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Post by JediLeia on Dec 19, 2005 15:29:51 GMT -5
*cough, cough* Yeah, I mighta killed it. Lol. It's ok, Zekk of Ennth, insults hurled at me are ok. lol. As long as they're friendly. ;D .
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Post by Courtney Solo on Dec 20, 2005 10:10:14 GMT -5
NEXT POST:
"Luke! This isn't just a triggered alarm system! There are people...or things, up there shooting at us!" Mara shouted to her husband.
"I've only just noticed." He stated dryly.
"Do you have a plan in which I DON'T get vaporized!?" Dean Jinzler complained loudly.
"You could go find Lola." Mara suggested.
"No way, I'd get lost and she'd never find me."
"Knowing you, that's probably true." Mara grumbled under her breath.
"I resent that." The Dean hid behind a pillar as another shot tried to find its mark. "Seriously, though, what should I do?"
"Wait for Lola and dodge shots." Luke instructed as he deflected yet another plasma shot.
"Jinzler to Lola: Are you alright? We..or..er... I could use some back-up."
"Lola to Jinzler: I'me fine. I have Commander Fel and his Stormtrooper Unit and we are on our way to aid you, we should be there in roughtly 30 seconds."
Sure enough, 30 seconds later...
"Troopers, round and about!" Commander Fel ordered.
"You two follow me, we're going to sabotage those guns." Lola pointed to two stormtroopers and started to climb up the steep staircase to the upper level where the cannons were located. Chak watched as the gunners turned all but one cannon towards Lola. She deflected the shots as best she could, but some of them clipped her. She grunted in pain.
"Lola, get back!" Chak heard himself shout. She shot him a glance and he reddened. If she backed away then his stormtroopers would be shot. She advanced slowly towards the guns, only increasing the amount of gunfire poured upon her. Another bolt caught her arm. She hacked a plasma cannon in two.
"Troopers, back away slowly, but let me stay in front of you." Lola yelled over the noise. She has started a chain reaction, and the cannons were all exploding, and now the rubble was a hazard. The troopers obeyed, and just when Lola thought she couldn't block another peice of debree or take another step, Chak caught her in his arms and Luke and Mara took over debree blocking.
"Troopers, cover!" Unit 501st, or half of it, crowded around Chak and Lola while they headed back towards the sick-bay. Lola almost fainted in pain because her bad arm was pressed against Chak's side.
"Lola?" Chak whispered to her when she was settled down on a medbed.
"Yes?" She murmured.
"When you go into your trance, don't wake up in 50 years." She grinned and patted his shoulder with her good hand.
"No worries." He caught her hand and held it until she fell asleep.
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Mara and Luke watched as Chak held Lola's hand.
He's falling for her hard, isn't he? Mara asked.
Well, I know what he's going through. Luke answered.
You do, huh? 'splain. Luke took Mara's hand.
He's going through mental pain, not wanting to become possesive of her, but not wanting for her to get hurt.
And you went through this, you say? Now she was getting sarcastic.
In the caves, many times.
Which reminds me, I still hafta ask Artoo...something. Luke was about to ask what that 'something' was when Chak looked up.
"Hello." He sid, not sheepishly as they had expected.
"Is everything alright?" Mara asked gently.
"I suppose so. Her wounds are minor, but its her arm that worries me, I don't think it will be strong enough to heal completely." He looked back down at Lola.
"I meant with you, you lok terrible." Mara joked.
He didn't look up. "I'll live." Mara decided not to push it.
"So...when Dean Jinzler returns with your unit what do you plan to do?" Luke asked, Chak looked up sheepishly.
"Follow your lead? I've never been good around skeletons. And we'd need a guide."
Luke smiled. "We plan on staying, and we already have an exellent guide," he motioned to Lola. "- and besides, wherever Lola goes she'll need a squadron." Chak rolled his eyes good-naturedly.
"We'll leave you to Lola." Luke winked and guided Mara out of the room.
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Lola opened her eyes slowly, then her brother sighed.
"Thank goodness." Lola glance reverted to Chak Fel, who was standing behind the Dean. She smield at him and he grinned back.
"Where are the Skywalkers?" She asked her brother.
"They went scouting ahead." Lola's eyes grew wide and she leapt out of the bed.
"That's dangerous! On this ship they're most likely to get themselves kiled!"
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Post by JediLeia on Dec 20, 2005 22:00:28 GMT -5
The adventure continues! *resists urge to kill the plot line*
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Post by anakinsangel on Dec 26, 2005 13:47:07 GMT -5
Haha, thanks for resisting, cuz frankly, ZOE is (oh wow! I just noticed his initials are awesome!) in the neighborhood.
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 1, 2006 21:22:17 GMT -5
lol. ;D
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Post by tahiriveilasolo on Jan 6, 2006 21:44:17 GMT -5
Oi.
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Post by tahiriveilasolo on Jan 6, 2006 21:58:42 GMT -5
*forces herself to update* -----*****_____-----*****_____ Luke stretched out with the force to in an attempt to gain his bearings. "Can you sense an uneasiness about the ship?" Luke asked Mara. "You'd think that after 50 years it'd disappear," She stopped short. "I can sense Lola, she's saying to stop and wait for her." Luke rolled his eyes sarcasticly. "Trust the women to force bond." Mara raised an eyebrow. "Bond? Me and Lola?" "Nevermind." They stopped and waited for Lola and her followers to arrive. And waited. And waited. "Let's go, Lola's not headed towards us anymore," Mara grumbled as Lola's persence became more and more faint.Luke looked at his wife, bewildered. "I mean go LOOK for her, what else?" ***************************************************************************************** Lola limped speedily out of the room. Kriff, I shouldn't have gotten up so fast. Chak had to run to keep up with her. "What's so dangerous about this ship that could kill them?" He asked breathlessly. "Outbound Flight had some secret cargo no one knew about. Everyone tried to find out about it, but only one person knew how to get through all the booby traps without getting killed. Even Lorana and I couldn't figure it out. If they even step into a room they're not s'posed to... BLAM!" "Who knew how to get through it without being......Blammed?" He asked. "For the persons safety nobody told anyone who it was. It could've been the janitor for all I know." "So no one at all knew?" Lola frowned at his question. "I was on the verge of finding out when the Vagaari attacked. I have my suspicions of who it might have been, but none of them are solid evidence." "Fire away." She raised an eyebrow. "shouldn't we discuss this later, Commander Fel? At th epersent, Mara and Luke are in grave danger." She stopped then gasped. "I can't feel them anymore!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I just lost Lola. You don;t suppose there's any ysalamiri on board, do you?" Mara asked her husband. "Highly unlikely, unless..." He paused. "Unless what, Luke?" She prodded, stopping. "Recent events have led me to believe-" "-Cut the small talk and spit it out." She commanded. "Either something else, besides Lola, survived all this time, or she isn't telling us the whole truth." ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "Are your commlinks jammed?" Lola asked. "yeah, but the weird thing is, there isn't a sign of any broadcasted static. It's like someone's jamming us, but they aren't in range...which is immpossible."Chak inspected his commlink so he didn't see Lola's face pale. Never extinguish, Never die, Never surrender, Never give up, Never stand alone-forever... Lola wheeled around. Glowing blue-white figured rounded the corner, their weapons held high and creatures beside them bellowing. And they were charging them.
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 7, 2006 2:51:24 GMT -5
OH NOOO! Hang tight, Lola! Luke and Mara will find a way to help you out!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 12, 2006 15:43:32 GMT -5
Hehe. I <3 being sithly. ;D
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Feb 12, 2006 4:40:36 GMT -5
lol i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it;s ssssssoooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more plz
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Post by Courtney Solo on Feb 15, 2006 21:51:49 GMT -5
It's a comin'
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