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Post by yodaman on Jan 20, 2006 12:59:14 GMT -5
ya
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Post by yodaman on Jan 20, 2006 12:59:40 GMT -5
cool! I made it turn to page 2!! ha ha!
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Post by yodaman on Jan 20, 2006 13:00:01 GMT -5
;D
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 20, 2006 16:04:54 GMT -5
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Post by DV's Daughter_♥ on Jan 21, 2006 19:18:29 GMT -5
I am 5th person to post on pg.2
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Post by yodaman on Jan 22, 2006 8:17:34 GMT -5
ya, why?
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 22, 2006 10:23:20 GMT -5
Ookay...   |
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Post by yodaman on Jan 24, 2006 10:15:01 GMT -5
ok
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 24, 2006 18:03:54 GMT -5
*rolls eyes*
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Post by yodaman on Jan 24, 2006 19:42:03 GMT -5
wuteva
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 24, 2006 19:44:10 GMT -5
Perhaps it is time for an update? I thought I'd try to write a better fight scene...lemme know how much better this one is.
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*6 months later*
Zekk had really screwed up this time. It was only a small disagreement, but he'd had a bad day, gotten upset, and blown it way out of proportion. Jaina would never let him live it down. They hadn't spoken in over a day.
Zekk couldn't stand to fight with her. He'd been without her long enough. Even the smallest separation from her was hard to stand.
He'd really gotten to Jaina. And the anger in her eyes...no! He couldn't think about it. It hurt him too much. Fighting with Jaina hurt him too much. His heart was split in two, and he, himself, was responsible.
Stop right there!
That's exactly where I lost it.
See that line?
I never should have crossed it.
Stop right there!
You know, I never should have said that.
It's the very moment that I wish that I could take back.
He had to go crawling back. He didn't even care about his diginity or his ego anymore. The things other guys cared about. No, they didn't matter. All that mattered was Jaina. She was his world. Zekk knew that. No, he didn't know that. He lived by that. Jaina was his reason for carrying on. Without her, where would he be? Back on the dark side. Yes, she was the sole reason why he had come back. He had lived in darkness, but soon he saw the warm sunlight that shone straight from her soul. Jaina had been Zekk's lighthouse, guiding his heart into the harbor of peace. But would she forgive him? That, Zekk did not know.
He arrived at her door. By now, he had been given the combo and knew it by heart, but he couldn't just key it. It wouldn't be right. So he knocked. An angry Jaina opened the door. But there was something about the anger in her eyes. It was softened. Almost as if it weren't real. As if she'd already forgiven him.
"Jaina, I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to say any of the things that I did. Just please, please forgive me. I'll never treat you like that again. My day had been stressful, and I just blew up. I'm so sorry." Zekk pleaded with her. But the next thing Zekk saw, was a door in his face.
Jaina lay on her bed, crying into her pillow. She wasn't mad at Zekk anymore. But she was sure angry with herself. Why did she have to be so stubborn? Why couldn't she just take him back? She knew Zekk was sincere; his eyes told her that. His deep, captivating eyes...why in the Corellian blazes was she doing this to him? Jaina had forgiven him. Couldn't she just play the role of forgiving girlfriend for once? Why did she have to play the role of the stubborn idiot? She sighed.
*Thud, thud, thud.* There was a knock at her door.
Jaina rushed over and palmed the entry. "What do you want?" she snapped out of frustration with herself.
"Jaina, I --" Zekk couldn't say anything. Jaina was so upset with him. He couldn't take it anymore. "I'm sorry, Jaina! I shouldn't have said what I did. As soon as I said it I knew I'd gone too far. I don't know if you have it in your heart to forgive me. I don't deserve you, Jaina. But you're my life. I can't," Zekk sniffed as his eyes began to tear up, "live...without you."
Whatever it takes, that's what I'll do.
I'd give anything to get back to you.
I know I was wrong.
I've made some mistakes.
But I'm gonna' do whatever it takes.
Jaina gazed into his eyes, as tears streamed from her own. She didn't think it was anything he needed to tear up over, but still, his concern was genuine. No, she couldn't pretend she was angry any longer. She loved him too much. Zekk was too important to her. Not talking to him for an entire day was agonizing enough. She couldn't drag this out any longer.
"Aww, Zekk, what happened the other night really hurt. I know you're sorry. But I shouldn't have said a lot of things that I did either." Jaina softened her tone. "And I'm sorry, too. But, Zekk, know that I will always take you back. No matter what happens. I can't live without you either. I love you, Zekk."
Zekk pulled her into a warm embrace. He loved the way her head fit perfectly just under his chin...
I'll take you back.
Always.
Even when your fight is over, now.
Even when your fight is over, now.
I'll take you back.
Always.
Even when the pain is coming through.
Even when the pain is coming through.
I'll take you back.
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Post by yodaman on Jan 25, 2006 8:03:50 GMT -5
cool
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 25, 2006 11:25:05 GMT -5
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Post by JediLeia on Jan 25, 2006 21:16:45 GMT -5
Do you really? Did I do better than my first one?
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Post by yodaman on Jan 26, 2006 7:50:52 GMT -5
they're the same to me
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Jan 26, 2006 19:40:21 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....... *metls into mush*
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Post by Courtney Solo on Jan 29, 2006 9:31:11 GMT -5
*flies in looks @ post* Awww!  *floats out* ;D |
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Jan 31, 2006 19:58:01 GMT -5
lol yup totally
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Post by Courtney Solo on Feb 1, 2006 20:51:33 GMT -5
;D
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Post by JediLeia on Mar 7, 2006 21:25:43 GMT -5
Ick. I NEED to update.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Mar 7, 2006 21:33:33 GMT -5
*agrees heartily* ;D Look who's reminding who NOW.  |
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Post by JediLeia on Mar 8, 2006 18:53:15 GMT -5
Yeah, yeah...*mutters*
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Post by Courtney Solo on Mar 8, 2006 20:50:19 GMT -5
lol It's okay, JL, you'll be fine... |
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Post by JediLeia on Mar 18, 2006 15:54:49 GMT -5
Okay, I really don't like the way this next post turned out. It's just too...too...I don't know. But I just don't like it. It's because I lost the inspiration halfway through its' writing. That's why it took me so long to get this one done. Nevertheless, here it is. Don't be cruel...  ******************** Jaina sat on her bed, bored out of her mind. She wasn't tired, and there was absolutely nothing left to do in her room. It was after 10, so she wasn't allowed to go hang out with Jacen in the guys' wing. Tenel Ka was probably sleeping, and Tahiri was back on Tatooine for break. With a sigh, she fell backwards so that she was lying on her bed. Thinking of something, she sprung up and sat down at her computer. *click...click...tap tap tap, click* "Aw, sith! The holonet's down, too!" Jaina stormed back to her bed, and plopped down onto it. "Technology sucks," she muttered bitterly. Meanwhile, Zekk struggled up the vines on the side of the great Masassi-built Jedi temple. Even with the Force, it was a difficult task. Breathing heavily, he grasped on to the fat, green, snake-like vines, pulling himself up ever so slowly. Jaina's room was only two stories up, but Zekk never thought that it would be so hard to climb such a short distance. "Just a little farther..." he thought. Jaina heard something tap her window. "Perfect. Now it's raining. Just the touch to a miserably boring night." She sat up as the tap became more of a knock. "Wha..?" To her surprise, Zekk was on the other side of her window! Jaina immediately rushed over and opened it. "Zekk, what are you doing two stories up the side of the Jedi Temple?" "Well, something told me you were bored." Zekk replied as slyly as he could. Jaina just shook her head in amazement. "Zekk, sometimes you surprise me so..." Zekk cut her off. "Yeah, well, sorry to cut the small talk, but can I come in? I'm sort of slipping....down the side of the...building..." "Oh, yeah," she helped pull him inside. Let's go,
Knocking on my window,
We can watch the late show,
And movies made for cable,
And then we'll talk,
Listening to punk rock,
We'll hang out and wait up,
Until the sun comes up. |
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Post by obi1roxmysox on Mar 18, 2006 20:12:10 GMT -5
aawww!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet! i <3 it!
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Post by Courtney Solo on Mar 19, 2006 21:20:30 GMT -5
 That was great! ;D |
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Post by JediLeia on Mar 20, 2006 20:22:38 GMT -5
No, no it wasn't. I think that was the worst passage I've ever written. There was just something about it that was like...the way I wrote in fourth grade, or something.
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Post by Courtney Solo on Mar 20, 2006 21:25:39 GMT -5
Well, I liked it, I think it's humorous.  |
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Post by Marybeth (anni) on Mar 20, 2006 22:40:19 GMT -5
I like dat post! "Technology sucks," she muttered bitterly.Sometimes. . . but I do have to agree Zekk cut her off. "Yeah, well, sorry to cut the small talk, but can I come in? I'm sort of slipping....down the side of the...building..."Oh mi gosh, that was funny |
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Post by JediLeia on Mar 20, 2006 23:45:15 GMT -5
I do agree, I liked that part, too.
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Jesus Freak 
